Feedback: Strengths and Improvements

Mise en Scene
-Car park/shed setting is appropriate
-Good outside settings

Cinematography
-The running effect is usefull
-The effect of using a hand held camera worked really well
-Own camera running is good similar to 'Cloverfield'

Editing
-Really good, upbeat lots of shaking camera. Swift/smooth
-Really well made titles
-Proffessional title at the begining
-Really good at the begining 'Like a real film'

Sound
-Fits with the action
-It builds tension
-Music is really good
-Diegetic sound really good (Breathing)
-Sound builds suspense and pase this adds tension.

Genre Conventions
-Asks questions immedialtely
-Fast paced
-Who is he running away from? Questions are being asked